I'm so tired having a continuous duty in so many hospital in Antipolo Area. After my last duty, the night was so great and I'm inspired to write something about someone else, that is beyond my imagination.. When we are on the way to our house, I wrote a poem and save it in my cellular phone.
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If the Moon comes Out without shine of it's own
It is meaningless to witness the beauty of the dawn
That can lighten the path of those who mourn
Dreams and wishes that's being Burn
A sudden change of yours will fall us apart
A light will gone and empty your heart
Sadness will be, no smile will post
No hugs, no kisses just like a ghost
Cold tears are enough
It will put me into half
It reap upon my soul
To have you is my goal
If the sun will shine
I'm hoping you're fine
And after this eclipse
You will be mine
Some of my friends read about this, there are many ways to express your feelings, when you are bored around the things that surrounds you. Please leave a comment tnx..
Maganda. I like it. :)
ReplyDeleteaheheh... tnx for the comment,,
ReplyDeleteANDRAMA naman nito
ReplyDeletepero AYOS lang.
gawa ka pa marami
medyo NAKAKABiTiN e.
Wow LOVETT^^
ReplyDeleteang galing mo
uhm kaso sad nga lng
pero nice!
uhm gawa k ng marmi pa
kasi nkaka bitin eh..
crinkles :) mgnda xa.. gling mo :) imy..
ReplyDeletehaha nice...
ReplyDeletelove it...
inspired...???
just keep praying then things will be alright..
tc..
tnx sa mga nag comment... mag popost pa ako ng madame and layu na bhala mag husga.. you will be inspired,, =)
ReplyDeleteinfairness..
ReplyDeleteGANDA aa.. LiKE it !
naun q lng nalaman,
na nagsusulat ka pla ng mga poems.
well, keep up the good work dude :))
-- jieane
opo heheh... mag popost pa po ako.. maybe tommmmorowww..... ^___^
ReplyDeleteTol... ang ganda ah.. astig!! SENSEI nga talaga kita parekoy...^_^
ReplyDeleteKeep on posting pa ah...
aabangan ko yan
nice blog dude. my sense. haha carry on : D
ReplyDeleteahehe tnx... next poem APHRODITE
ReplyDeletegrave!!! makata!!! pang talentadong pinoy!!! loverboy k pla!!!!
ReplyDeletein love si dude!!! ahahaha
ReplyDeletesinu ba yan huh??? pakilala mo naman!!!
nice dud la ka parin kupas!!!
qng publisher lng me news paper isasama ko to!!!
nice one!!!
hey dude, nakalimutan q mag-comment kagabi eh, sorry...
ReplyDeleteBakit parang sad ung poem, pero ayos lang....mganda promise....
pa-follow ako....
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nice ganda ito pla yung gm mo dati db?? haha steeg napapanahon pa ang title nito magiging magaling ka sa ganitong larangan ken haha ang lalim :))
ReplyDeletenice ken you are great! keep it up..level up kana wew..
ReplyDeletedon't forget to follow me and leave some comment thanks
ahahah... uu po madaming thanks=)
ReplyDeletewow! Galing! like!
ReplyDeleteang lupet naman ganyan talaga ang masipag mag-aral pag-patuloy mulang yan DUDE!-HeraM
ReplyDeleteinlove..? para kanino to?
ReplyDeletenice poem.. :))
ReplyDeletekeep it up!
ang galing! haha
ReplyDeletekaya lang sad... keep it up!
I like the concept. Maybe you just need to work on the syntax and semantics because some lines are quite vague. But anyway, I really admire people who have passion for poetry. They are the real 'cool'people. Hats off! :D
ReplyDeleteganda :))
ReplyDeletenice one, ken. :)
ReplyDelete+", pinilit aqoh.. haha?? ikaw b c edward?? hinahanap q kse c bella . . ~jac0b^^
ReplyDeleteaus to pre ah??haha..
r0mar
hotdog ahaha
ReplyDeletewahahahah ayus yun dud aa.. hehehe
ReplyDeleteah kempoY, r u really d 1 who made that? owss....... anyways...... it's such a great!!!!
ReplyDeleteahahh awweee.... hehehe...tnx
ReplyDeletesoooo...pagalingn sa pggawa ng poem ito...hahaha anyway nice job
ReplyDeleteken,
ReplyDeletewat u experience during ur duty is also experience by us....
it for us how we can manage it...
Now showing. :)))
ReplyDeleteHaha!
lupit mo ken. idol kita! ipost mo pa dito ung iba mong gawa. gumagawa rin ako pero tagalog. :) i love it.
ReplyDeletepafollow ah. :)) miss u.