Friday, June 25, 2010

Duty Of Arts

For the Lovers, artists and Students ... Please comment =)

I'm so tired having a continuous duty in so many hospital in Antipolo Area. After my last duty, the night was so great and I'm inspired to write something about someone else, that is beyond my imagination.. When we are on the way to our house, I wrote a poem and save it in my cellular phone.

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If the Moon comes Out without shine of it's own
It is meaningless to witness the beauty of the dawn
That can lighten the path of those who mourn
Dreams and wishes that's being Burn

A sudden change of yours will fall us apart
A light will gone and empty your heart
Sadness will be, no smile will post
No hugs, no kisses just like a ghost

Cold tears are enough
It will put me into half
It reap upon my soul
To have you is my goal

If the sun will shine
I'm hoping you're fine
And after this eclipse
You will be mine


Some of my friends read about this, there are many ways to express your feelings, when you are bored around the things that surrounds you. Please leave a comment tnx..

35 comments:

  1. Maganda. I like it. :)

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  2. ANDRAMA naman nito
    pero AYOS lang.

    gawa ka pa marami
    medyo NAKAKABiTiN e.

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  3. Wow LOVETT^^
    ang galing mo
    uhm kaso sad nga lng
    pero nice!

    uhm gawa k ng marmi pa
    kasi nkaka bitin eh..

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  4. crinkles :) mgnda xa.. gling mo :) imy..

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  5. haha nice...
    love it...
    inspired...???
    just keep praying then things will be alright..
    tc..

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  6. tnx sa mga nag comment... mag popost pa ako ng madame and layu na bhala mag husga.. you will be inspired,, =)

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  7. infairness..
    GANDA aa.. LiKE it !
    naun q lng nalaman,
    na nagsusulat ka pla ng mga poems.
    well, keep up the good work dude :))

    -- jieane

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  8. opo heheh... mag popost pa po ako.. maybe tommmmorowww..... ^___^

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  9. Tol... ang ganda ah.. astig!! SENSEI nga talaga kita parekoy...^_^
    Keep on posting pa ah...
    aabangan ko yan

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  10. nice blog dude. my sense. haha carry on : D

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  11. ahehe tnx... next poem APHRODITE

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  12. grave!!! makata!!! pang talentadong pinoy!!! loverboy k pla!!!!

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  13. in love si dude!!! ahahaha
    sinu ba yan huh??? pakilala mo naman!!!
    nice dud la ka parin kupas!!!
    qng publisher lng me news paper isasama ko to!!!
    nice one!!!

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  14. hey dude, nakalimutan q mag-comment kagabi eh, sorry...

    Bakit parang sad ung poem, pero ayos lang....mganda promise....

    pa-follow ako....

    kingqueen26blog.blogspot.com

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  15. nice ganda ito pla yung gm mo dati db?? haha steeg napapanahon pa ang title nito magiging magaling ka sa ganitong larangan ken haha ang lalim :))

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  16. nice ken you are great! keep it up..level up kana wew..
    don't forget to follow me and leave some comment thanks

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  17. ahahah... uu po madaming thanks=)

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  18. wow! Galing! like!

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  19. ang lupet naman ganyan talaga ang masipag mag-aral pag-patuloy mulang yan DUDE!-HeraM

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  20. inlove..? para kanino to?

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  21. nice poem.. :))
    keep it up!

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  22. ang galing! haha
    kaya lang sad... keep it up!

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  23. I like the concept. Maybe you just need to work on the syntax and semantics because some lines are quite vague. But anyway, I really admire people who have passion for poetry. They are the real 'cool'people. Hats off! :D

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  24. +", pinilit aqoh.. haha?? ikaw b c edward?? hinahanap q kse c bella . . ~jac0b^^

    aus to pre ah??haha..


    r0mar

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  25. wahahahah ayus yun dud aa.. hehehe

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  26. ah kempoY, r u really d 1 who made that? owss....... anyways...... it's such a great!!!!

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  27. soooo...pagalingn sa pggawa ng poem ito...hahaha anyway nice job

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  28. ken,
    wat u experience during ur duty is also experience by us....
    it for us how we can manage it...

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  29. lupit mo ken. idol kita! ipost mo pa dito ung iba mong gawa. gumagawa rin ako pero tagalog. :) i love it.

    pafollow ah. :)) miss u.

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